"Hot erotic fantasy of revenge."
SINS OF THE FATHER is a whirlwind of action, with author
Black compressing an entire story in just 58 pages. This e-
book is great for an erotic one-sitting read, but those
looking for an emotionally fulfilling story will find it a
bit lacking. Candace Morgan has lusted after James Douglas Mahoney III
since she was 13 and he 23. No one felt worse than she when
her billionaire father unfairly fired JD, stealing his
young protégé's ideas in the process. Now years later, 40-
year-old JD possesses the power to destroy the company. He
gives Candy an ultimatum: submit to him in atonement for
her dead father's sins or watch her family be torn apart. The rest of this story is a combination of really hot sex
and attempts to establish characterization within the
limited word count. JD is at times a sexually dominant
alpha and at other moments an almost tender lover. However,
because of the brevity of this book, the dichotomy between
the two personas is a bit stark; if the story were
expanded, the transformation would have been more
believable. Also stretching the believability factor is that Candy
signs a prenup that states that she must submit to JD in
every single matter. "According to Clause 76, I, the
undersigned, am supposed to offer my body as a sperm
receptacle to my husband twice daily, every day, for as
long as we both shall live." Extremes such as this are the
basis for much of this tale. However, it is true that this story is meant to be more
fantasy than fact. Though the behavior of the h/h is
fantastic, these two really do burn up the pages! The sex
is heated and graphic; the only obvious fault in the scenes
is the overuse of certain explicit words -- a good
thesaurus or some judicious editing could have solved this.
Fans of Black's work will find this book up to her usual
sexy standards, though perhaps a bit too short for complete
emotional satisfaction. Sensuality: NC17, masturbation, anal sex, light
exhibitionism, oral sex. Reviewed by Barb Chan for Sensual Romance.
Reviewed by Sensual Romance
Courtesy Sensual Romance
Posted October 4, 2002
SummaryCandy Morgan has always felt badly about the fact that her
father duped and then fired his former protégée, James
Douglas Mahoney III. Worse yet, she knows that JD has always
believed her to be a part of the conspiracy to get rid of
him.
When JD comes to power during a hostile takeover of Morgan
Chemicals, Candy realizes he will want revenge against her
family so she prepares herself to be ousted from the
company. But much to her surprise, JD doesn't oust her.
Instead, he wants his vendetta against the Morgans settled
in an entirely different fashion, in a way Candy never could
have imagined in her wildest, most wicked dream...
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