"Captured by pirates!"
Written for Sensual Romance by A. Black
Lady Lissa Stilton is aboard her father's ship with her
cousin and maid when the
ship is boarded by pirates and they are taken as prisoners.
Her cousin suggests
that the maid switch clothing with Lissa to avoid revealing
Lissa's identity.
The ploy backfires when the Captain, Black Jack recognizes
Lissa.
Lord John Fitzpatrick, aka the infamous pirate Black Jack,
finds the life of a
English Lord boring, so he masquerades as a pirate captain,
capturing and
plundering ships with the best cargo. In London he found
himself on the verge of
falling in love with Lissa, so he left at the height of the
season to avoid a
commitment. But when he captures Lissa's father's ship, and
discovers Lissa is
aboard, he acts quickly to conceal his identity and save
Lissa's virtue -- from
the crew, that is. Lord Fitzpatrick has no qualms about
enjoying Lissa's charms
while they are at sea, and not restricted by London society
rules. He claims her
as his booty but he must treat her like any other pirate
would. Although his
goal is to keep his men's respect, will he lose Lissa's
respect and her love?
This is not a poorly written story, but I did not enjoy it.
I found the
characters boring and two-dimensional, and most of the
hero's and heroine's
motivations were not believable. For example, John doesn't
want his men to know
who Lissa is, so he claims and then rapes (in my opinion)
her in his cabin. He
tells her, "Before long you will be spreading these sweet
white thighs eagerly
for my cock." Sure enough, shortly thereafter she submits
willingly. This is
not the behavior of a gently raised woman who has just been
captured by pirates
-- regardless of the time period. John is not my idea of a
hero, and Lissa is
not a strong, smart, sassy heroine. Prehaps other readers
will disagree.
Sensuality: S-ensuous
Sensuality: oral sex, violence
Reviewed by Sensual Romance
Courtesy Sensual Romance
Posted February 14, 2006
Note: Previously published as "The Adventuress" by Amatory
Ink, August 2002.
SummaryA few dances together, and Lord John Fitzpatrick has
captured Lissa's heart. Soon London gossip whispers that,
possibly due to a lady's honor, he's disappeared. So do
Lissa's dreams. Saddened from the recent loss of her mother,
Lissa sets sail for her home in Caribbean. The trip is
peaceful until a sailor shouts "Captain Jack!" The pirate
was bearing down on them faster than they could outrun him.
Lissa switches clothing with her maid. The ploy could have
worked, but when Cap'n Jack sees the wench at his feet, he
immediately knows he has a problem. Instead of a serving
girl, his captive is Lady Lissa Stilton. Fear of commitment
caused him to desert London at the height of the Season, and
the source of his fear now lies at his feet.
What should be a simple capture, plunder and release is
suddenly complicated beyond his wildest dreams. Cap'n Jack,
alias Lord John Fitzpatrick, captured a Stilton ship on
purpose—those ships always carry the best goods to and from
the Islands. Also, he knew Lord Peter Stilton's daughter was
safe in London. Unsure of the right course, he takes Lissa
as his captive...and his lover. After months at sea, her
father finds them and orders Lissa on board his ship. The
real adventure begins as they return to life in London and
discover as much about their own self as they do each other.
Just when Jack is sure he knows what will happen, Lissa
turns his world upside down one more time.
Sexual Content: Rated S-ensuous
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